4 comments for “Draft Chapter Nine of Book 3

  1. Lynne Mackness
    November 7, 2017 at 7:33 am

    Enjoyed that. Thanks😊

    • November 7, 2017 at 12:32 pm

      Yay! 😀 Thank you, Lynne. Book 3 is much more the Gaius/Allerix vs. the world book. And I had a blast showing the sillier side of Gaius.

  2. Alle fan
    November 10, 2017 at 10:38 am

    So many interesting chapters for me to read! This book is going to be one hell of a ride and I can’t wait for it.

    I still love Alle and to be honest I’m still don’t particularly like Gaius all that much but I guess in this last chapter I didn’t want to punch his head in and that feels nice lol but yeah, I still feel sorry for Allerix even if compare to his fellow Dacians, he’s in a much, much better place. Being a sex slave when he at least enjoys the sex is sure better than what happened to his friends, the chapter where he visited his friends and former lover in prison was excellent, I felt so much for them all (Except for Fabian ofc!) but the way it went with his former lover that I can’t remember his name now was heartbreaking, and I loved that I still felt so much sympathy for him and understood why he did what he did and still felt so much for Alle who truly wanted to help and had no blame for what happened to them all.

    I still can’t believe in their “love” as a good thing when one has absolute power and control over the other but Fabian can be very kind to him as a master so I can see why Alle thinks he’s in love, and all that sex probably helps I’m sure! I’m very curious what’s next.

    • November 12, 2017 at 4:57 pm

      I’m tickled that you are enjoying the draft chapters posted to date. There’ll be at least one more draft chapter before I go deeper into the writing cave and finish Book 3. In many ways, this is Allerix’s book. <3

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